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Parmenion
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Posted - 28 October 2006 : 10:12:00 AM
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ut was he john? maybe he had a past that most did not know? mabe our new prefect knows more about him than we thought...that or i screwed up??
how about some people thought that the assasination attempt that he missed was deliberate and organised by the emperors son??
Centurion Parmenion
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Edited by - Parmenion on 28 October 2006 10:13:52 AM |
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John Prigent
Homosapien
United Kingdom
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Posted - 28 October 2006 : 10:22:45 AM
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Well, we could edit the description given long ago in his thoughts to go that way, and it sounds good!
Cheers
John
Captain, Star Fleet
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Viriatus
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Netherlands
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Posted - 29 October 2006 : 02:17:08 AM
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So Parm is back and teeth are being broken...:-)
"How bright is the light if there’s no one else to see it?"
"Scire tuum nihil est, nisi te scire hoc sciat alter" |
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Nísia
Small mammal
Portugal
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 Posted - 01 November 2006 : 9:16:36 PM
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| May I give a suggestion? i think your story to much talk and few action a battle or riot to catch the reader. |
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Parmenion
Homosapien
United Kingdom
13892 Posts |
Posted - 01 November 2006 : 9:30:21 PM
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it seems that way, but thats because the posts are so short if you read the compilation its a bit better, and dont wrry i inject violence as often as i can
Centurion Parmenion
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Viriatus
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Netherlands
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Posted - 04 November 2006 : 3:31:50 PM
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Isn't the plot resembling something seen previously?
Bit tricky, as we all are Simon's fans and the collective imaginary is based in common denominators, so... we either sort of involuntarily plagiarize or we read it that way.
But it sounds good, anyway!!!
"How bright is the light if there’s no one else to see it?"
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Viriatus
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Netherlands
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Posted - 04 November 2006 : 3:39:49 PM
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I just add a part where Mucius can produce his own army, or think he can...
"How bright is the light if there’s no one else to see it?"
"Scire tuum nihil est, nisi te scire hoc sciat alter" |
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John Prigent
Homosapien
United Kingdom
8415 Posts |
Posted - 05 November 2006 : 2:40:08 PM
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Is it time to start a new chapter, back with Parmenion and Andius?
Cheers
John
Captain, Star Fleet
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Parmenion
Homosapien
United Kingdom
13892 Posts |
Posted - 05 November 2006 : 3:07:02 PM
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yes lets tie this up and start a new thread for the next chapter )(11)
last seen parmenion was about to get answers from Dagda, we return to find dagda broken and having spilled his secrets, we need to now have a chapter where we recount the secrets and also were we start to act on what has been found out.
Centurion Parmenion
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John Prigent
Homosapien
United Kingdom
8415 Posts |
Posted - 06 November 2006 : 4:58:11 PM
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Parm, Andius is still at the fort. OK, I forgot that too but do you want to change Andius to Ankhron?
Cheers
John
Captain, Star Fleet
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Parmenion
Homosapien
United Kingdom
13892 Posts |
Posted - 06 November 2006 : 6:31:16 PM
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i meant cantius
Centurion Parmenion
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John Prigent
Homosapien
United Kingdom
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Posted - 06 November 2006 : 8:41:47 PM
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If Dagda has a broken jaw (what genius came up with that?) either he knows how to write so can give answers in writing, or it will have to be nods and shaken heads for yes/no answers. Writing will be easier for us to keep the story going.
Cheers
John
Captain, Star Fleet
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Parmenion
Homosapien
United Kingdom
13892 Posts |
Posted - 07 November 2006 : 09:18:12 AM
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i didnt break it...his hands are going to be messed up as well so his writing will be a bit of a mess but just readable
Centurion Parmenion
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Ankhsy
Homosapien
United Kingdom
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Posted - 07 November 2006 : 12:50:59 PM
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OK, I've amended my posting, Parm. So you'll have to amend yours and we can carry on with the bad writing.
"We're Starfleet Officers, weird is part of the job."
Star Trek Voyager - Capt. Janeway
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John Prigent
Homosapien
United Kingdom
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Posted - 08 November 2006 : 4:43:49 PM
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So who's going to decide whether Ankhron gets a strip torn off for not hearing, or whether Parmenion is a good man-manager who understands his people?
Cheers
John
Captain, Star Fleet
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Parmenion
Homosapien
United Kingdom
13892 Posts |
Posted - 08 November 2006 : 4:51:34 PM
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LOL...i wanted him engrossed in what dagda was writing....we can have parmenion rip him a new one and then be embarressed as he sees why with all the information gleaned fromdagda...its time to spill some of the beans though
So i think we need to have some time in here laying out what the plot is for the conspiracy!!
I think its time we named the emperors son and showed that he is in league with the barbarians, he is using them to take his fathers throne, we can have him give a guide to where he is based and that leads us onwards with parmenions group and links back to a messenger going to the legion and so we can have a legion chapter again!!
Opinions??
Centurion Parmenion
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John Prigent
Homosapien
United Kingdom
8415 Posts |
Posted - 08 November 2006 : 5:27:14 PM
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Sounds good! Can we call the son Antonius? No link there to any real Emperor I can remember.
Cheers
John
Captain, Star Fleet
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Viriatus
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Netherlands
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Posted - 08 November 2006 : 11:16:50 PM
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Uh, sorry John, I was the "genius" of that broken and dislocated jaw, guess I got carried over...
I'll try to restrain myself from braking more parts of him...(but maybe a severed limb would teach him some old respect!!!)
"How bright is the light if there’s no one else to see it?"
"Scire tuum nihil est, nisi te scire hoc sciat alter" |
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Ankhsy
Homosapien
United Kingdom
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Posted - 10 November 2006 : 12:54:02 PM
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How much worse does it get, Parm? I need some direction here.
"We're Starfleet Officers, weird is part of the job."
Star Trek Voyager - Capt. Janeway
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Parmenion
Homosapien
United Kingdom
13892 Posts |
Posted - 10 November 2006 : 12:58:32 PM
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john has us offing the emperor, i was going to include outright revolt of the northern and western gaulish tribes, open revolt in britain and the outlines of an invasion plan
Centurion Parmenion
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Ankhsy
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Posted - 10 November 2006 : 1:01:19 PM
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OK, sounds big.
"We're Starfleet Officers, weird is part of the job."
Star Trek Voyager - Capt. Janeway
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Parmenion
Homosapien
United Kingdom
13892 Posts |
Posted - 10 November 2006 : 1:05:29 PM
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hey you have to think big when your talking roman treachery
Centurion Parmenion
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Ankhsy
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Posted - 10 November 2006 : 1:10:18 PM
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Point take. They never did things by halves.
"We're Starfleet Officers, weird is part of the job."
Star Trek Voyager - Capt. Janeway
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John Prigent
Homosapien
United Kingdom
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Posted - 10 November 2006 : 1:53:20 PM
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Hispania, Greece and North Africa are not affected - can we get some Spanish auxiliaries to help Simonius?
Cheers
John
Captain, Star Fleet
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Parmenion
Homosapien
United Kingdom
13892 Posts |
Posted - 10 November 2006 : 1:58:41 PM
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why not! they can link up with him inn the next chapter, we can have the next chapter take place after the messenger arrives from parmenion (thus avoiding a few weeks gap)
Centurion Parmenion
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Nísia
Small mammal
Portugal
661 Posts |
Posted - 10 November 2006 : 6:42:16 PM
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| Most be interesting to know more about that girl, "who was flirting with Graeminicus" she cuold know more then others |
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Parmenion
Homosapien
United Kingdom
13892 Posts |
Posted - 10 November 2006 : 6:50:16 PM
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she will turn out to be the disguised clerk at the fort
Centurion Parmenion
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Nísia
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Portugal
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Posted - 10 November 2006 : 7:13:49 PM
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| A woman disguised a man during the romans times?!! Could be this possible? |
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John Prigent
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Posted - 10 November 2006 : 7:39:04 PM
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Why not, it has happened in other armies!
Cheers
John
Captain, Star Fleet
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Nísia
Small mammal
Portugal
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Posted - 10 November 2006 : 8:31:58 PM
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| yes, but in Middle Age when people hadn't to take off the clothes and take a bath like romans had! Could you explain a woman in middle of 6 men in a tent were everybody live together, changing clothes and using a simple tunic how could her to disguise her chest? |
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